Reply to "The beginnings of a new song?"

I think I have a 2nd verse, but will keep working on it, picking it to bits....then maybe some music?

The crying child I sought to drown, my foot upon her head
Came swimming to the surface, claiming never to be dead
The cynical indifference, I played so convincingly
It came undone, should I go on denying part of me
    All times London, UK.

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